I think what you wrote made a bunch of sense. But, what about this?
what if you were to create a killer post title?
I am not suggesting your information is not solid., but suppose you added a post title that makes people want more?
I mean Dole 과일농장 is kinda vanilla. You ought to look at Yahoo's front page and see how they write post titles to get
people to click. You might add a related video or a picture or two to get people interested about what you've written.
Just my opinion, it might make your posts a little livelier.