I believe what you posted made a lot of sense.
But, consider this, what if you typed a catchier title?
I am not saying your content isn't good, but suppose you added something that grabbed people's attention? I mean Dole 과일농장
is kinda boring. You should peek at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create post titles to get viewers to open the links.
You might try adding a video or a picture or two to get readers
interested about everything've written. Just my opinion, it would bring your blog a little bit
more interesting.